This week in writing we have been learning about how to write a persuasive argument.
I found it challenging trying to find strong words to convince my audience.
I felt strongly about having more singing times so choosing that topic was easy.
More Singing Times
Did you know that if we had more times to sing we will become better listeners?
I want you to believe that we need more singing times.
First we need more times to sing because it is with your mode and we find it relaxing.
Second we love singing because we can express ourselves and it builds confidence.
Third since I have done singing in the school I have I have got very good and lots of us could because professionals.
So now you should know that we need more singing times !
by Lily
I like how you have set out your persuasion in paragraphs Lily. Mr Breach would love this persuasion. Next time I would like to hear more ideas to support each paragraph.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment Mr Moriarty. Mr Breach loves it. I will try next time to support the paragraphs better. Lily H
DeleteHi my name is soroya i love to sing and sleep a lot.
ReplyDeletebut i want to know what u sing and how high u can sing how an were.
Thanks that is a great comment Soroya.
DeleteWe sing a lot and I am in the choir and the leader It's great that you like to sing as well I love to sleep as well.
I don't know how high but for our new song Perfect by Fairground Attraction I do the high part I will try and find how high I can go. from Lily H