This week in writing we have been writing a story from a picture prompt.
I found it challenging trying to find wow words to put in my story.
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ne fantastic evening a door popped up In my wall. But it was small. I told my mum she said fiddlesticks you don't have a small door in your room. So I said come back and look mum don't see the door It's like the door chose me. When mum went out of my room a fairy came in she put pixie dust on me and I shrank. Mum said it's time for dinner I bet mum didn't see me coming down, She was a monster because she was so big and she made me go on the side of the wall. Because mum was running so that made me hit the wall . And then door opened I went in the door and there was a bunch off golden when I went In the door closed and I was stuck for an hour. Then the fairy came back and got me out of the small door then I went to sleep.
By Teagen
It would be awesome to have a magic door to go and visit Teagen. Don't forget to add speech marks when somebody is talking. I would love to know more about the magic fairy.
ReplyDeleteHi its Teagen. Thank you for commenting on my work I really appreciate it. And I do agree about on writing some more of the story, because I did´t write much about the magic fairy. Perhaps soon, I'll write a story about her.
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