Friday 16 March 2018

Coconut blindfold writing

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This week in writing we have been learning about how to write a persuasive argument.
I found it challenging trying to find strongly words to convince my audience.
I felt strongly about coconut blindfold writing so choosing
that topic was easy.
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2 comments:

  1. Wendy Huriwai20 March 2018 at 09:24

    I like how you have used your senses to describe how the coconut look, felt and smelt. Next time I would like to know more about how the cocnut felt in your mouth when you started chewing it.

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  2. Unknown23 March 2018 at 10:21

    Hi Mr Moriarty, it's Aiden here. Thank you for commenting. In my mouth it was really dry and I did not like it. Right afterwards I needed a drink of water. I needed to wash my hands because it stuck to my hands and my t-shirt.

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