This week in writing we have been learning about how to write a persuasive argument.
I found it challenging trying to find strongly words to convince my audience.
I felt strongly about coconut blindfold writing so choosing
that topic was easy.
I like how you have used your senses to describe how the coconut look, felt and smelt. Next time I would like to know more about how the cocnut felt in your mouth when you started chewing it.
ReplyDeleteHi Mr Moriarty, it's Aiden here. Thank you for commenting. In my mouth it was really dry and I did not like it. Right afterwards I needed a drink of water. I needed to wash my hands because it stuck to my hands and my t-shirt.
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