In Literacy I have been learning about vocabulary and WOW WORDS for impact. WE looked at a picture and thought critically about it. We used lots of reflective questions to think about the picture. I found difficult the part was I had to try to use lots of wow words. I found making my picture was easy.
Did you know there lived a little girl with a big dream? She felt upset because none of her dreams ever came true. one day she woke up to a big fat surprise. One of her dreams had finally come true but she wondered what it was?
It had a few little disadvantages though because all the cars were gone so she was wondering what it was but… It might be one of her nightmares where all the cars disappeared and said she had to walk to school everyday, she really hoped that it was not.
One day outside she found out that everyone was floating on bubble she thought her dream had finally come true she just hoped it didn't turn into a nightmare. All of a sudden she fell asleep and dreamed that the bubbles will take over the world. All of a sudden she woke up and the town was scared there was sticky goop everywhere everyone's shoes got stuck to the goop.
The bubbles picked up the people and took the to the dump where they all got dropped in the car smasher and died as soon as the poor little girl got dropped in she woke up screaming in terror, but she was relieved that it was just a dream or was it…
By Connie
You have some interesting ideas and used some great WOW words Connie. I am still a little confused to what the girls dream was? Was she happy it came true or was it a nightmare dream? Maybe you could describe he dream earlier in your writing.
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