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Wow Angie. You have raised some really good points in your persuasion. I like the strong language you have used. I agree that morning tea time could help with leadership and to resolve conflicts.
Hi Angie my name is Shzstela and i really like your your writing and i think that we should have more morning tea time because we can get even more fit if we have more to and if you want to check out my blog it is shttp://kwsshzstelap.blogspot.co.nz/ so that's my blog.
hi My name is Karl from pcs and i would like to note that \i agree that we shoud have more moring tea time in our school its about 25 mins I would love to have an extra 5 minutes
Hey Karl! Thanks for letting me know on what you think about this blog post. Can you think of how I can improve this piece of writing? I would love to hear your feedback! :)
I really enjoyed reading this post and agree with you that we should have more morning tea time! I really enjoyed reading your blog. Looking forward to reading more of your post
Thanks, Bree! Can you think of anything of what I can do to improve this piece of writing? I would love to hear your feedback! Otherwise, thanks for commenting!
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Wow Angie. You have raised some really good points in your persuasion. I like the strong language you have used. I agree that morning tea time could help with leadership and to resolve conflicts.
ReplyDeleteCan you find any proof that backs up you argument Angie?
ReplyDeleteHey Mister Moriarty! It's Angie here. I think that they can do better at class if they have more morning tea time!
DeleteHi Angie my name is Shzstela and i really like your your writing and i think that we should have more morning tea time because we can get even more fit if we have more to and if you want to check out my blog it is shttp://kwsshzstelap.blogspot.co.nz/ so that's my blog.
ReplyDeleteHey Shztela! It's Angie here. Yes, we can learn more and be more fit if we get to have more morning tea time. Thanks!
DeleteHI my name is shania and i like your blogs and i am so hugarey naew dy.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is mahia and i like your blogs and i am so hugarey naew dy
ReplyDeletehi My name is Karl from pcs
ReplyDeleteand i would like to note that \i agree that we shoud have more moring tea time in our school its about 25 mins I would love to have an extra 5 minutes
Hey Karl! Thanks for letting me know on what you think about this blog post. Can you think of how I can improve this piece of writing? I would love to hear your feedback! :)
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this post and agree with you that we should have more morning tea time! I really enjoyed reading your blog.
Looking forward to reading more of your post
Bree
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Thanks, Bree! Can you think of anything of what I can do to improve this piece of writing? I would love to hear your feedback! Otherwise, thanks for commenting!
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