In writing we have been learning to write persuasive aguments about plastic bags and if we think they should be banned first we did a question to hook the reader in then we answered it for what we think then we tell you facts that are sad so you will not want to use them. What I felt fun was finding about all of this stuff . What I felt challenging was thinking what to say
Would you eat a plastic bag? ¨Yeah... I would not too!¨ Most turtles die from plastic bags they should be banned!!!
Don't litter, do you know what happens to one piece of plastic? Well I do and you do not want to know. Imagine a garbage truck full of plastic that is being dumped into the sea every minute.
Plastic is dangerous and it kills marine life. It contains dangerous chemicals like petroleum. Don't let or put plastic in the drain to go to sea. It is cruel because you know what will happen.
I know, that you know, we will do the right thing to save the seas.
by Ashton
Hi my name is Maika I am from Kaikohe West School I am from room 1 and a year 5.
ReplyDeleteI dont know what happens actually but yes it does hurt our marine life and I dont like the way people litter and what is you'r favourite animal.
hi maika it is ashton here my favourite animal is a lion and sea turtles. what is your favourite animal.
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Terence and Im from kaikohe west school and im am from room 1 and i am a year 5 i dont know why people try kill ow sea animals
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Kia Ora South Hornby school,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how told us what you were doing and what your process was. I really liked how you pulled us in with that question. I totally agree that plastic bags should be banned they are polluting the world and are not good for the environment. Two weeks ago in sewing we made reusable bags that are good for the environment.
Yours Sincerely Grace
Yaldhurst Model School
Hello south hornby school
ReplyDeleteEben from yaldhurst model school here I really like how you've explained well how bad it is to litter plastic bags and I know how bad it is I had to study thing like this and think we should use environmental bags that are good for the environment because it will help the animals
Kind regard Eben
I my name is Shadae i'm a year 5 from kaikohe west school I really liked how you poster a post about pasticbags should be band because most turtles are dieing.
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ReplyDeleteI'm Gracie from yaldhurst model school
I really enjoyed this writing
I really like that you want to ban this. I am happy that you want to ban it because you don't like it and the animals are dying from this.
Thanks Gracie from yaldhurst in rimu class
Hello Ashton!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year six student at Yaldhurst Model School.
I am an animal lover, My favorite animals are turtles tigers wolves and dogs.What is your favorite animal? This blog post court my eye very quickly I read it with a heavy heart and showed my friend that also loves turtles, she was very sad as was I.
This was an amazing blog post but I would recommend doing things like this on a google slide then you and make it more you, and you can hold more information.
Keep up the Amazing Work!
Kind Regards Maddison from Yaldhurst Model School
Hi Ashton,
ReplyDeleteI like how you added glowing words to your post because it's eye catching. Imagine scrolling down and only seeing black and white. Anyway back to the topic. Ocean life is important, my Dad always talk about plastic doing bad things. Don't worry, it isn't annoying. I always this about the plastic. To be honest I think it's too late to do anything now. People only do things when it's a problem, not fixing it in the first place.
Next time you should write more about land animals, land animals are also having problems with plastic. How does the chemical damage the body of a sea creature? How many rubbish are there in the ocean?
I look forward to your next post.
By Mika
Yaldhurst Model School
Link to blog: http://ymsmika.blogspot.co.nz/
hi it is isaac from yaldhurst school I really liked how you poster a post about pasticbags should be band because most turtles are dieing.
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ReplyDeletehey ashton I agree that plastic bags should be band like you should pay for them
ReplyDeletehi ashton i like that post it is cool the turtle is cool what is it eating there is heaps of words from cody at papakura central school
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ReplyDeleteIm lucky from papakura central school. i really like how you made a statement/question and then answer it. next time try to have more punctuation. bye bye.
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ReplyDeletehi it is isaac from yaldhurst school I really liked how you poster a post about pasticbags should be band because most turtles are dieing you may need to put same full stop's in your post.
Hey Ashton!
ReplyDeleteI think it is great that you are helping making people aware of the plastic in the ocean that is killing the turtles. DO you want to keep trying to help them when your older? Maybe you could be one of the people who help save them?
From Hannah,
Year 8,
Yaldhurst Model School.
I liked how you done everything and its nice and really set out well
ReplyDeletehi ashton my name is tipene,its really nice the layout i really love turtles and i don't want them to die too
ReplyDeleteI agree with you ashton there should be no plastic bags
ReplyDeleteHi Ashton,
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with you it's disgusting that we are letting this happen. At my school I have started working on how to get rubbish out of our school. What are you going to do about all the rubbish in the ocean?
I really liked this post it has given me loads of ideas on what I'm working on. Looking forward to reading more of your post.
Bree
Yaldhurst model school.
Hi it's Hunter from yaldhurst model school I like the poster that you made about getting rid of plastic bags. I agree because it killing the turtles. I think you could of put more facts and they're about turtles and plastic bags. I think you should put your colour into the Document and had more fun with it.
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ReplyDeleteAshton you are right plastic bags should be banned since its killing sea creatures
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Eben from yaldhurst model school here I really like how you've explained well how bad it is to litter plastic bags and I know how bad it is I had to study thing like this and think we should use environmental bags that are good for the environment because it will help the animals
Kind regard Eben
hey Ashton your right they should ban the plastic bags because it's killing small sea creatures
ReplyDeleteHay this is Kairo. I really hope that bags get band from the world. and that the turtles of the world survive with out the plastic bags.
ReplyDeletegreat i love how you show what rubbish can do
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ReplyDeletethe picture is cool but it looks disgusting
by tipene
that looks real good but money for charging for plastic bags won't work because turtles can't do anything with money so the should just stop
ReplyDeleteHey Ashton it's Angie here~
ReplyDeleteI loved how you wrote this. And I agree that plastic bags should be banned because it's killing many marine animals and it takes too long to break down into pieces or to decompose.
Hi South hornby I'm Hunter from yaldhurst model school,
ReplyDeleteI definitely agree that we should stop ocean pollution. For our enquiry we have been learning about ,ocean pollution,Ozone pollution,Air pollution,
I agree it is very bad for the environment.
Hunter
Hi my name is Isla from Papakura Central School,
ReplyDeleteI like how you asked a question at the start.Check out my blog.
http://pcsislad.blogspot.com/
hey ash it's Jeff from rugby nice job on your blog post I think that you have made it cher that you think that we need to save our seas and I would not eat a plastic bag beacuse that would make me sick peroperle and nice job on getting my dad's awad at prize giving hope that I will play with you next seacon will done on your blog bye now.
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