Welcome to our Blog. Here you will discover work from the Raupō Learning Community who are in Pūnui-o-toka. We are Year 4-6 children. Please leave us a comment.
Hi Karl From PCS And I love the fear/scared It has so much detail It gave me a chill down my spine Heres the link to my blog http://pcskarls.blogspot.com/
Hello class. MY name is lucky and I thought that your poetry was amazing it got very well described and i love how you used many kind of things to describe. I think and as an opinion that if the students photo was on there it would be better. bye bye.
Hi Mrs Jack I like the way you chose different feelings one person could have I remember when I also have one of those feelings in my mind Next time you could put a picture of a face of the feeling By Armika, Papakura Central School Rm 5
Kia Ora Hannah my name is Shzstela from kaikohe west school.
i really like your joyful story you have written you had a little bit of mistakes but above all i liked how you set it out and how you described. if you want to check out my blog here is the link http://kwsshzstelap.blogspot.com/. and if you want to go on our class blog heres another link http://kwsdeborahwallace.blogspot.com/. blog you later.
kia ora hannah my name is Lexus.I am from kaikohe west school.
I really liked your describing words that you put into your poem.They are so interesting and good.I liked how you added A photo so you know what you are talking about.
If you want to have A look at my blog post hes the link http://kws-lexus.blogspot.com/
Hi my name is Ocean-lee and i'm from kaikohe west school. I really like the way you did a poetry about feelings because it really gives back those good and bad old memory but I love how it brings them back because as a kid it was hard and that happens some times. But if you want to go see my blog here is the link http://kws-ocean-lee.blogspot.com/
Kia Ora, My name is Julia and I am a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School. I really enjoyed reading all of your wonderful poems. I also really like how it was about different emotions and feelings. Next time maybe you could add what you learnt and what you like about writing these poems. Apart from that, the post was amazing.
kia Ora, I really like how you showed us what this blog post is about. I also like how all of the poems are really descriptive and they really show what each emotion is. Maybe next time you could tell us a bit more about how long did it take you to do these poems and also what topic did you do these poems for. Did the students enjoy writing poems?
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Hi Karl From PCS
ReplyDeleteAnd I love the fear/scared
It has so much detail It gave me a chill down my spine
Heres the link to my blog
http://pcskarls.blogspot.com/
Hello I'm Lucinda from pcs
ReplyDeletei really loved this poetry
it made me have goose bumps
I felt Amazing
I'd love to hear back!
the first joyful poem was really good i really liked all the poems and the joyful poem reminded me of all the happy times in my life
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Hello class.
ReplyDeleteMY name is lucky and I thought that your poetry was amazing it got very well described and i love how you used many kind of things to describe. I think and as an opinion that if the students photo was on there it would be better.
bye bye.
Hi Mrs Jack
ReplyDeleteI like the way you chose different feelings one person could have
I remember when I also have one of those feelings in my mind
Next time you could put a picture of a face of the feeling
By Armika, Papakura Central School Rm 5
Kia Ora Hannah my name is Shzstela from kaikohe west school.
ReplyDeletei really like your joyful story you have written you had a little bit of mistakes but above all i liked how you set it out and how you described. if you want to check out my blog here is the link http://kwsshzstelap.blogspot.com/. and if you want to go on our class blog heres another link http://kwsdeborahwallace.blogspot.com/. blog you later.
Kia Ora Hannah my name is Samicia I am a year 6 student at Kaikohe West School.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you describe the senses e.g. Sounds,Feels,Taste and looks.
I also really like the describing words you used in your poem.
Here is the link to my blog if you want to see my learning.
http://kws-samicia.blogspot.com/
Nga Mihi
Samicia
Kia Ora Erin my name is Shzstela
ReplyDeleteI really like your recount about joyful and how you described all those describing words. ka pai.
Kia Ora Brooklan my name is Samicia I am a year 6 student at Kaikohe West School.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you described the object you were talking about.
I also really like the way you used feeling words in your poem.
Here is the link to my blog if you want to see my learning.
http://kws-samicia.blogspot.com/
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!:)
Nga Mihi
Samicia
kia ora hannah my name is Lexus.I am from kaikohe west school.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your describing words that you put into your poem.They are so interesting and good.I liked how you added A photo so you know what you are talking about.
If you want to have A look at my blog post hes the link http://kws-lexus.blogspot.com/
Hi my name is Ocean-lee and i'm from kaikohe west school.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you did a poetry about feelings because it really gives back those good and bad old memory but I love how it brings them back because as a kid it was hard and that happens some times.
But if you want to go see my blog here is the link http://kws-ocean-lee.blogspot.com/
Kia Ora, My name is Julia and I am a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading all of your wonderful poems.
I also really like how it was about different emotions and feelings.
Next time maybe you could add what you learnt and what you like about writing these poems. Apart from that, the post was amazing.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
kia Ora,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you showed us what this blog post is about.
I also like how all of the poems are really descriptive and they really show what each emotion is.
Maybe next time you could tell us a bit more about how long did it take you to do these poems and also what topic did you do these poems for.
Did the students enjoy writing poems?
Yours Sincerely,
Grace