I will never eat nasty, nutty, normal noodles.
I will never wear navy nails nicely.
I will never buy a box of nappies in the native forest.
I will never read a book about nazi and navey people.
I would never go to nice Niciś home.
I would always like to think about native birds and nobody.
And I promise to never go to the mall naked with Nici.
By Nici
I was learning about writing stories about putting words that start with the same letter next to each other. This is called alliteration.
Hi my name is Sarah from Wesley Primary School. I liked how you used Alliteration. For our poem this term our focus is using Alliteration.
ReplyDeleteNext time instead of using "I will never" you might do "I won't ever go to nice Nici's home".
hi my name is sofaia from Wesley primary school i liked that you used Alliteration for your poem this term our focus is using Alliteratiopn
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ReplyDeleteHi its Andrea here and i am at Wesley primary in Rm 4 I like how you guys did your Amazing Art bird you guys are good painters you can use on the poem Alliteration but I am so please if you could come to Wesley primary school and show us your wonderful work but WELL DONE ! keep it up ! and nice picture of your bird.
Kia Ora,
ReplyDeleteI am Isaac from YMS this is such a cool, poem I have written one of these and it is not as easy as it looks. This one is so cool though. How long did this take to make?
Isaac YMS.
Hey there, it's Chloe from yaldhurst model school I really like this. it is such a cool poem. It must of been hard to make.
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison
I am a year 5 student.
At Yaldhurst Model School.
I liked how you used descriptive words.
I liked the picture at the end.
It was an AMAZING BLOG POST
I even got my friend Mia and Nikita to read it
Ka Pi
From Maddison
Hello my name is Maddison I am a Year 5 student at Yaldhurst Model School
ReplyDeleteI liked the how you had a nice sense of humor and that you used you in the story and that you used unique words and that you added an picture that is appropriate for the story
Was the picture of the bird about the native birds?
Hi Nici, My name is Abby and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteYour Poem is really funny with the words you chose and the picture of the bird is cute. Its also seems hard to get 2 words starting with the same letter next to each other.
Kind Regards, Abby.
Hi my name is Alanna,
ReplyDeletefrom Awahono school. I really enjoyed reading you never poem it reminds me of my little brother being really annoying not wanting to do anything or not wanting to eat anything.
-Alanna