Julia
That Was Summer!
I remember smelling the beautiful and sweet flowers.
I remember tasting the really bad taste of the salty sea water.
I remember seeing lots of buzzing bees and butterflies.
That was summer
I remember feeling all of the soft , green grass
I remember hearing so many annoying cicadas and their clicking.
That was summer.
By Julia
Hi My name is Sarah I like how you remembered your Summer it was interesting. I saw some creative words but I found a website with a little bit of different words http://coolestwords.com/category/type/dictionary.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used i remember hearing but instead you could say i remember listening to cicadas and their clicking.
Hi Julia my name is Maddison I am a year five at Yaldhurst Model School and good job it was very beautiful I cant wait for your next poem.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you described your memories of summer. Maybe you should add more detail next time like, I remember how the waves disappear in the sand like magic. Which memory was your favourite?
Love Mika
Yaldhurst Model School
Hello Julia
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison.
I am a year 5 student.
at Yaldhurst Model School.
I really liked your blog post.
I liked how you used very descriptive words.
good job.
Did everyone in your class do something like this or just you?
Ka Pi
from Maddison
Hi there Julia! I loved your little writing about summer and I think that you have done a great job of using alliteration. It's really short but detailed and that's the important thing. The best alliteration line that you have written to me is seeing lot's of I remember seeing lots of buzzing bees and butterflies.
ReplyDeletebuzzing bees and butterflies. Great job and keep up the great work!