This is my Spencer Park writing. We learned how to write a recount and to put our ideas into paragraphs - Lily
Spencer Park
On the 10th of March 2017 the year 4,5 and 6 Learning Community went to the amazing Spencer Park with some parents. We went there to bond and get to know each other better.
When we got there we had morning tea under the big tree . Mrs Dinnington put out the blue tarp because the grass was wet. After we ate we had a wee play on the playground. It had three flying foxes you sit on. Layla and I found a secret meeting spot at the bridge that we had found.
After that we went to the amazing beach that had nice blue water. We were not allowed to swim because is was not safe. What a bummer! We made some towers and unfortunately my team did not win but congratulations for the team that won. Then it was beach races.
Soon it was time to have lunch. We put out the blue tarp again and ate till the teachers told us it was time to play. We were allowed to play sports or play on the playground First I played a small passing game with Layla then we went off and played. I went on the longest and biggest flying fox there. Then after I finished I went and played volleyball with Mrs McGuinniety and Logan.
Soon it was time to go back to school and then home. I wish I could go back there again with my family and friends because it was a spectacular day there at Spencer Park. - By Lily
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ReplyDeletei loved that You Guys bulled the big humanism tower specially when you went to the freezing cold beach.
DeleteThanks it was luckley a hot day so it was not cold
Deletedid you have wonderful time at you trip ? i loved the humanism tower you made
ReplyDeleteI had an amazing day it was wonderful. Thanks
Deletedid you have a wonderful time at your trip ? i loved the way you made the humanest tower you made
ReplyDeleteI loved how you Guys Bulled the Giant humanism tower specially when you Guys went to then Freezing cold beach
ReplyDeleteThanks but it was not cold though
DeleteDid you have a fun day to your school trip well I wish you did.Was it sunny before you guy's went to you school trip cause I'm guess is was because the photo FROM LILLIAN FROM WESLEY PRIMARY
ReplyDeleteyes of course. yeah but it was sunny thanks
DeleteKia Ora,
ReplyDeleteI remember This trip when I was a yr 6. It was always my favorite trip because there is water a park and beach games. How long Did you stay? I hope you had fun :)
Isaac,YMS.
Oh how cool we stayed there the hole day I really enjoyed it can't wait to go next year
DeleteHi my name is Liam and I really like your post I really like the photos
ReplyDeletewas it fun
it was amazing better than landing a backhand spring
DeleteHi,
ReplyDeleteIf I was there with you I bet I would have lots of fun! Also the photos you picked were awesome! I would like to go there with my family too.
From Mika (Me Ka)
Yaldhurst Model School
hi im jacob williams from yms school If I was there with you I bet I would have lots of fun! Also the photos you picked were awesome! I would like to go there with my family too.
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ReplyDeletehi im jacob williams from yms school If I was there with you I bet I would have lots of fun! Also the photos you picked were awesome! I would like to go there with my family too.
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