I was learning how to use alliteration in my poem about remembering Summer.
Erika
I remember smelling… the burning dark fire that was in the air
I remember tasting… that rich chocolate Ice Cream melting in my mouth
I remember seeing… those bright blue bubble waves rising to the shore
That was summer
I remember feeling… the soft sand in between my toes at the blue beach
I remember hearing.. the birds chirping right outside my window when I woke up
That was summer.
By Erika
Hi Erika,
ReplyDeleteThank you for telling me about your Summer it sounds amazing. This reminds me of when I did this writing. Maybe next time you could change the color of the fonts. Thanks Phoebe
Kia Ora,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great poem about summer. what des this mean - I remember feeling… the soft sand in between my toes at the blue?
Tino Pai
Isaac YMS.