Thursday 19 October 2017

My First Day At Te Manu Tukutuku


My First Day At Te Manu Tukutuku


I feel curious as I walk around the school, because there's things that need to be explored.
I hear children walking to their classrooms, buzzing with excitement energy and eagerness.
I see the new playgrounds and basketball hoops being used and loved.
I smell the new paint and the fresh air binding together to make a new aroma.
I touch the soft, bouncy and comfy chairs.
Overall I feel proud about being a guardian and exhilarated about my future at this school.

by Hayley

👍WALT: write about how we feel about our new space. In our poem we had to include a Simile, Alliteration and Emotion words.


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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous31 October 2017 at 11:35

    Hey Hayley its Mahaliya From SHS
    Great job I love all of the words that you have used
    in this peace of writing nice picture and nice angle

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  2. Unknown27 November 2017 at 18:19

    Hi Hayley! I really love your poem! I especially like the part about the smells "binding together", and your use of the word "guardian" :)
    Have you thought about sharing your poem in the school newsletter?
    Best wishes, Ms Boothby (teacher at Hornby High)

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  3. Anonymous1 March 2018 at 08:56

    Mōrena SLC,

    Although this is a 2017 post, I wanted to take the opportunity to welcome you to Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu for 2018. My name is James and although I don't officially work with Manaiakalani anymore, I love dipping into the class blogs and taking to share in your learning. I really enjoyed reading some of your emotive writing. The descriptions are really clear and make me feel like I was really there! I can't wait to hear and read more about your learning, creating and sharing in 2018.
    Mā te wā
    James

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  4. Anonymous8 March 2018 at 14:07

    HI I like the description you have chosen in the places that need to be explored. And all the other buzzing words.

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  5. Anonymous16 March 2018 at 09:51

    Hello My name is kate and I go to papakura central school its really cool that you have joined that school I love your writing its amazing blog ya later

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  6. Anonymous19 March 2018 at 14:25

    hi hayley my name is shzstela and i think your writing is so cool starting a new school for me is scary because i'm not use to going to new school's all the

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  7. Anonymous19 March 2018 at 14:25

    time

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  8. Anonymous2 May 2018 at 12:01

    Hey there South Hornby, I am Parwin, a year 7 from Yaldhurst Model School. I really liked your poem because you used all the things you were meant to use. THis reminded me when I had to do this at my old school but your one was better than mine.


    Looking forward to your next posts,
    Parwin

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