I feel nauseous with excitement walking into a new chapter of my life.
I hear screaming of excitement playing on the new playground.
I see smiles shining and sparkling all over the school.
I smell the clean and refreshing fragrances as the new furniture.
I touch all different textures, soft, rough, rugged, all kinds on the walls.
I feel proud to be able to put other people's lives in my hands at road patrol.
By Lily
👍WALT: write about how we feel about our new space. In our poem we had to include a Simile, Alliteration and Emotion words.
👍WALT: write about how we feel about our new space. In our poem we had to include a Simile, Alliteration and Emotion words.
Hello my name is lucky.I liked how you put some feeling so i can imagan how you feel. next time try to put more details. good job bye
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ReplyDeleteMY name is Ava I go to Papakura-central-school.
I do Road Patrol to and I know how it is scary some times to know that you are stopping the road.
I loved reading your writing next time I think you could re-read it.
Bye
Hi lily my name is shzstela you have really good writing an it must be really scary Stoping car's I have a some friends who are road patrols to
ReplyDeletethey think it's a bit scary to but not that much and i'm going to be a road patrol next year .bye (:
and you should give a little more discription next time please thankyou
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