For the past 3 weeks I have been creating some tree art. I had to go through a lot of steps to get where I am, but I made it in the end. I am proud of the work that I have created. The part that I felt most challenging was the scratching. I had to scratch different objects into the different seasons. I have created this magnficent masterpiece....
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Friday, 10 August 2018
South Hornby School
For Free Writing in writing we got to choose what we were going to write about so I chose to write about my school. I chose to write it on a google slide I hope you enjoy it.
by Nici
Punui-o-toka
by Nici
Punui-o-toka
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Google Slides,
South Hornby School,
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Sunday, 22 July 2018
Feelings Poems
Here are some feelings poems from some of our AMAZING Poets!
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adjectives,
feelings,
literacy,
WOW words,
writing
Friday, 6 April 2018
What will you do? by Ashton
In writing we have been learning to write persuasive aguments about plastic bags and if we think they should be banned first we did a question to hook the reader in then we answered it for what we think then we tell you facts that are sad so you will not want to use them. What I felt fun was finding about all of this stuff . What I felt challenging was thinking what to say
Would you eat a plastic bag? ¨Yeah... I would not too!¨ Most turtles die from plastic bags they should be banned!!!
Don't litter, do you know what happens to one piece of plastic? Well I do and you do not want to know. Imagine a garbage truck full of plastic that is being dumped into the sea every minute.
Plastic is dangerous and it kills marine life. It contains dangerous chemicals like petroleum. Don't let or put plastic in the drain to go to sea. It is cruel because you know what will happen.
I know, that you know, we will do the right thing to save the seas.
by Ashton
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persuasive argument,
plastic,
strong words.,
sustainability,
writing
Ban the plastic bags by Hunter
In writing We have Been learning about persuasive arguments. I found all of this writing on that at all added up to a good cause because I got to read it out loud In the Assembly.
Do you know that Plastic bags are made from diesel?
Do you know that Plastic bags are made from diesel?
There is enough diesel in a plastic bag to power a car 115m.
I think we should ban plastic bags because they're killing marine life and other creatures.
Do you know that Turtles think that plastic bags are jellyfish? The most favourite thing that Turtles like to eat is jellyfish, so it is poisoning them.
Do you know fish are eating plastic? If plastics is in their food chain wouldn't it be an ours?
Would you eat plastic?
Plastic bags take 600 years to decompose in the ocean. In the year 2050 there will be more plastic bags in the ocean then sea creatures so when they die 50% of oxygen will disappear.
is too much plastic in the world. Every year New Zealand produces enough plastic to smother it twice.
3 million plastic bags are being thrown out every day in New Zealand.
1000 Turtles at dying everyday. Don't let Sea creatures die!
by Hunter


by Hunter
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plastic,
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Ban the bag by Arie
Would you eat a plastic bag? No, then why do sea animals do!
Animals are eating plastic bags thinking its food and now they are are dying.
I'm fine with bags, it's just can't they make bags that are not poison and that animals can breathe through. I mean at least they could stay alive.
Plastic bags are made of petroleum. Petroleum makes petrol and petrol is poison. Do you know the petroleum it takes to make one plastic bag can power a car and make it go 115m. Petroleum is poison and that means plastic is poison
It is also killing us because we eat fish and we eat food from plastic bags, I strongly believe that since our food touches plastic bags that means it affecting us humans and plastic bags are poison. So I think it's killing us, just slowly.
Do you know that every minute about 1 million plastic objects go to sea. And it takes like 4 million year's for plastic to break. if we keep this up think about what it will look like in 2019. So stop using plastic bags!
It was hard finding strong words to put in my writing. But It was easy researching because we were also reading about plastic bags. It wasn't really fun because in videos we saw animals dying. Also I read mine out at assembly
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plastic,
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Ban the Plastic Bags by Angie
Would you ever eat plastic? I know you don't. Did you know that plastic
bags are made of PVC (Polyvinyl Chloride) which is toxic? Plastics are
materials that are malleable and can be molded into solid objects like
Plastic Bottles and Plastic Bags.
It takes over 200-1000 years for the plastic bags to decompose. Also,
plastics can't break apart because they are made of high-density
polyethylene (HDPE).
Animals are in danger too! Aquatic animals can swallow plastic and they
can die. Some bits of plastics can be sharp and it may touch the marine
animals and they'll get injured.
A lot of energy is used in making plastics. They use non-renewable
resources. Experts in U.S.A explained that petroleum used in making
plastic bags in America would power 1.3 million cars.
Here are some facts about what plastic is causing us:
90% of bottles are not even recycled.
Over 8 million plastics are in our oceans.
Every minute takes 1 million plastics littered in the whole world.
Any plastic is brought to the Pacific Garbage Patch.
Over 100 million marine animals are killed each year due to plastic pieces in the
ocean.
We can help reduce plastic by;
- Use a metal bottle instead of a plastic bottle.
- Reuse your plastic bottles instead of throwing them to the bin.
- Say "No straw please" in cafes, KFC, etc. because straws in places cafes and
restaurants, are made of plastic too.
- Use a metal straw instead so you can still wash it and we can reduce plastic.
- Bring fabric bags instead of plastic bags when you're going shopping.
Plastic bags are harmful, not just to us, but the animals and our environment.
I strongly insist to ban plastic bags!
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persuasive argument,
plastic,
strong words.,
sustainability,
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