Showing posts with label writing experience. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing experience. Show all posts

Friday, 16 March 2018

Coconut blindfold writing

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This week in writing we have been learning about how to write a persuasive argument.
I found it challenging trying to find strongly words to convince my audience.
I felt strongly about coconut blindfold writing so choosing
that topic was easy.

Friday, 11 August 2017

The mysterious object


The Mysterious object

As we sit there, watching, we see the great king of literacy attempt to make a simple, round object made of the following; Poisonous, disgustable raisins; bitter, dark cocoa; bland, tasteless coconut and oats. We stare, involuntarily, as the imperator starts to amalgamate all the ingredients together using a food processor and the reverberation coming was execrable. The concoction was starting to come together.

As we slowly started to receive the horrible looking mixture, we rolled the conglomeration into a small spherical shape. After that, we all waited for the other people to finish rolling their interfusion into a ball-like figure. The object looked so incredibly inedible, that it already looked like I didn't want to eat it. After that, we rolled the globules in either utterly, bitter cocoa powder or grated, bland pieces of coconut.

After that, we talked about how it felt like, looks like, smells like and tastes like. We thought of different words to describe the truffle. After that, we ate the globules. It was the moment that I was dreading. Then, I ate a small bite. It was abhorrent at first, but then I had a bit more and I discovered that it was actually not  all that bad.

For the last part, we had to make a piece of writing about the mystery balls that we made and ate which is what you are reading now.

by Jed

WALT write about an experience using descriptive language features.